Образец ответа с комментариями.
(1) Shopping is fun (1.1). I enjoy going to different
shops, looking at different things, trying on skirts,
blouses, dresses, shirts before I decide what would
like to buy (1.1.1). Quite often shop assistants very
polite and helpful (1.1.2). I like the nice music they
play in shops (1.1.3). I know that some say shopping
is boring because there are a lot of people and you
have to stand in queues. I don't think so (1.2).
There are very many shops of different kinds so that
it is possible to find the ones you like (1.2.1). Besides,
there are a lot of cosy cafes in most big shops or nearby
where you can relax if you get tired (1.2.2). I can't
say that I like shopping for food (1.3) but I do it
when I am asked to (1.3.1).
(2) I like shopping with my friends (2.1). We can chat,
discuss all kinds of things, share our secrets while
going from shop to shop (2.1.1). When I try some piece
of clothing on I ask my friend to tell me if it looks
nice, if it fits or not. I almost always take the advice
my friends give me (2.1.2). I also enjoy shopping with
my Mum (2.2). She has a lot of style and I can learn
a lot from her (2.2.1).
(3) I like buying things in small shops (3.1). Usually
there aren't many people in them and you can take your
time choosing things (3.1.1). Shop assistants are friendly
and you can ask them for advice (3.1.2).
I don't like the impersonal service in big department
stores (3.2) where you have to wait before you can get
into the fitting room. Then if the thing does not fit,
you have to walk around the shop again to pick up another
thing you would like to try on (3.2.1).
However, there is a much wider range of goods (3.3),
so you have a better chance of finding something you
really need (3.3.1). As for discounts, they are offered
both in big and small shops (3.4).
(4) When I go shopping for food I usually make a shopping
list (4.1) because it saves time and you will buy everything
you have planned (4.1.1). Besides, you
won't be tempted to spend too much buying what you actually
don't need (4.1.2). However, when I shop for clothes,
it's normally just one or two things I need to buy (4.2)
and I try my best to go for them and not to pay attention
to all the other very beautiful stylish things telling
myself that I will buy them next time (4.2.1).
Образец ответа на дополнительный вопрос:
Do you decide on buying things because they have been
very widely advertised or for some other reasons?
(5) Well, I sometimes buy a thing, even if I don't
actually need it (5.1). You know, advertising is so
powerful. It makes you remember and look at the thing
that has been advertised more carefully (5.1.1). This
is the way advertising works. However, more often I
decide to buy something if I like it a lot (5.2), if
I see that it is good quality (5.2.1).
Все пункты предложенного плана рассмотрены:
(1) if it is fun for you to go shopping, why/why not
(2) if you prefer shopping on your own or with someone
(3) if you prefer shopping in small shops or big supermarkets
and department stores, why
(4) if you plan what things to buy before going shopping
or just buy the things you see and like while shopping,
Каждый пункт полностью раскрыт. так как содержит не
простое перечисление фактов или идей (1.1; 1.2; 1.3;
2.1; 3.1; 3.2; 3.3; 3.4; 4.1: 4.2), a развитие мысли
в виде приводимых доводов и пояснений (1.1.1; 1.1.2;
1.1.3; 1.2.1; 1.2.2; 1.3.1; 2.1.1; 2.1.2; 2.2.1; 3.1.1;
3.1.2; 3.2.1; 3.3.1; 4.1.1; 4.1.2; 4.2.1)
B целом высказывание связное и логичное, состоящее
из целых предложений, а не из обрывочных фраз. Аргументы
логически связаны с развиваемой мыслью.
Ответ на дополнительный вопрос (5) содержит не только
выражение точки зрения отвечающего (5.1; 5.2), но и
ее обоснование (5.1.1; 5.2.1).